A literary editor told me while I was writing my to-be-published memoir that I have to hook the reader on Page 1, Chapter 1. Otherwise, they’ll never flip through the pages that follow. And, even before cracking open the book, most will check out its back cover to see if it’s been endorsed by someone noteworthy and to read a synopsis. In essence, a great deal hinges on the backside!
Today, I’d like to share the brief overview of how I’m pitching my manuscript to potential agents and publishers. These are the types of phrases that could find a place on the book’s rear jacket.
“Boy-next-door” Tony Morris was living a good life in Atlanta with a fast-paced corporate communications career, a loving relationship, great friends and a beautiful home – or so it appeared. Then, everything capsized and he found himself struggling through a tempestuous mid-life meltdown. Now in his mid-40s, he knew he needed to reconnect with his original self, the one from his Alabama childhood, and relive the treasured and troubled moments of his youth, as those were factors that had made him the man that he’d become. In his quest to connect the two eras – childhood and mid-life – together, Morris experienced an amazing spiritual awakening. What he didn’t expect were the bizarre events in Palm Springs and Louisville that mentally, physically and emotionally challenged him like something out of his wildest dreams and nightmares. His life would never be the same again.
Thanks for reading and being a sounding board. I’d love to hear your initial thoughts as to whether or not you’d want to read the entire story. Interested? Bored? Or, perhaps, hooked?
Love and light,
Tony
Can’t wait to read the rest of the book
Thanks so much, Tori! Appreciate your support : )
I concur with Tori absolutely! Definitely a page-turner…..pray tell more!
Tony
Hey fellow Tony! Thanks for the endorsement! Love your blog too! http://www.thrivewithtony.com
Well, you got me hooked. I can’t wait to get my copy! If your book is anything like what you just wrote to lure me in (and I can’t imagine it wouldn’t be) can I pre-order the book?
Keep these little nuggets coming!
love you
Hey Honey! The minute I get a publishing gig for the book, I will let everyone know. In the meantime, enjoy the process. Right ? : )
very cool tony! something to think about when i publish my memoir!
Hey! I’ll read your book, if you read mine! Deal? Take care!
Sounds great. I would read it. I like that you put Alabama in there and I hope there’s more about Bama in the book. 🙂
Hi Dana – Yes, there is lots of focus on Alabama in the book.
First of all— I LOVE the phrase—-‘In essence, a great deal hinges on the backside!’ That made me smile! It’s true, in many areas! Ha! Seriously, I think you’re off to a fabulous start and I HOPE you’ll come nearby ‘HOME’ for a book signing!!! I’m SO there!!! GOOD LUCK!!!!!!!!! 🙂
Hi Kaye! I’ll definitely be coming to Alabama when the book’s published! In the meantime, catch you on the backside LOL!!!
Great job Tony. The summary hooked me. I definitely want to read the rest of the story.
Kim
Kim – Thanks so much for your comments. Hope you’ll get to read the “rest of the story” in the near future. Take care : )
Tony, I like where you are going, and I feel it would get my attention because I have an interest in Spiritual Connections. Even more so, I would like to see it actually say Psychic Spiritual Connection because I feel it better describes what you have experienced. And the word Psychic is always an attention getter. Folks are drawn to the mystery of Psychics – “Are Psychic’s the real deal?” – We know you are the real deal! Just a little thought that came to me. Love and JOY, Debi
Thanks so much for your suggestions! These are great! Really appreciate your sending them to me: )
Can’t wait for the rest! Send me a message if you get to Houston. Would love to see you!
Hey Laurie! Thanks for your comment…there’s lots more to share : ) Will definitely let you know when I make it to Houston…same for you if you come to California.
Love It! Can’t wait to read your book!!!!!
Thanks so much honey! Really appreciate it!
I can’t wait to read your book! It sounds wonderful.
Thanks Tina! Writing it has been an amazing experience for me. Stay tuned and thanks, again : )
Tony the overview has hooked me and I can’t wait to read your book. I feel sure some publisher will publish your book very soon. Best of luck and keep us posted.
Thanks so much Paulette! The right agent and the right publisher at the right time will come along. In the meantime, I really appreciate the comments, suggestions (and encouragement) that I’ve received along the way!!
Tony, I can hardly wait to read your book! If the book is as interesting as you are it will sell MANY books. Please advise me when you have a publisher and know when it will be available to buy. The overview is fine, but I do agree with Deborah that using the word “psychic” will catch people’s interest and sell more books.
Love and wonderful memories,
Jane Conrad
Your comments mean so much to me! So glad you came into my life in 7th grade! I’ll definitely include the word “psychic” in the overview! Love to you!
I can’t wait to read the book. Keep up the good work!!
Thanks so much! Really means a lot to get your feedback!
DAMN……… Hey Tony I want to keep reading BUT the my reading came to an abrupt end …Wanted to read more but I’ll have to wait till your book comes out huh Cousin making me wait on the edge of my seat ……What you wrote was so good to peek someones interset GOOD JOB
Hey Pam…glad it got your attention : ) Thanks for your encouragement : ) Love to you
BRAVO!!!!!!
I would pick that book up in a heartbeat, after reading that backcover!
Hey Tracy! Wow! Thanks for the nice bit of encouragement. Stay tuned! 🙂
Definitely hooked! Can’t wait to read it! Excellent backside! Love you, V V
Hey honey! Thanks for reading my backside LOL! Really appreciate it! Love to you!
Hi, Tony. In publishing, as in life, the backside is very important. 😉 I think the synopsis is very attention-grabbing and would definitely prompt me to open the book to read more. A couple of constructive comments: (1) Is it possible to hint at just one of the “bizarre” events? Rather than telling me they were bizarre, how about a few words about one event? (2) I wonder if “like something out of his wildest dreams” might be a little cliche? Consider playing with this wording a bit more. Best of luck with the book. You know we’ll order one (or two!) copies for our reading enjoyment.
Hey Mike! Great suggestions! And, I agree, the ending sounds cliche.